Here is something I made this morning, perhaps ten minutes ago. It's a first draft, and I'm sure I'll revise it a hundred times, but I'm trying to share my writing with others; thus this post.
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Turkish Royals
In your filthy bedroom
Cluttered and filmy with dust
I saw an empty carton of Camels—
two hundred even-toed cigarettes
Cluttered and filmy with dust
I saw an empty carton of Camels—
two hundred even-toed cigarettes
marching mutably
to the next best thing.
You sucked
them dry with copper lips—
wolfish fault
lines of smoke—
and snubbed them out in
a broken pinch pot ashtray,
dejected like the rest.
and snubbed them out in
a broken pinch pot ashtray,
dejected like the rest.
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